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by Thickskullman on Aug 29, 2013
This one was always a good one, would've been cool if Ghost had stuck around to work on it a bit more though.
by EndMaster on Oct 9, 2011
this is a awesome story, you should do more working on it to make it better. the black sun story is very good and draws the reader in.
by skaro on Apr 7, 2009
by wxp1207 on May 2, 2007
Well done. I would give it a 9 but it reminds me so much of a The Great Conflict, a story I am currently working on (on and off). Especially the use of the Halo pictures and weapons. You should keep working on it and I should keep working on mine, this site needs more good sci-fi.
by apotheosis on Feb 27, 2007
You've impressed me (ask around - that's not a easy thing to do)! I took about a 4-5 month hiatus from this site, but you've ignored this story for too long.
Develop the CEL side of the story more. I know it's writing against type, but that's what makes it so intriguing to read.
Well done! (And no, I hate Sci-Fi, so extra kudos are in order for overcoming a reader's negative preconceptions.)
by michaelrayholt on Aug 7, 2005
Very detailed. Good storyline. I'm skeptical of most sci-fi, because alot of what comes out is lame-ass. But this was very unlame-asslike.
by donteatpoop on Jun 15, 2005
by Sketchor on May 24, 2005
Very well-written. I'm not a big fan of Sci-Fi, however. Otherwise I'd give you a 10.
by ChubbyTeletubby on May 19, 2005
by TMiller18 on Jan 5, 2005
very good and it really drawed me in
by jeffisthebest on Sep 24, 2004
by lioness1081 on Jan 25, 2004

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