The Gamble of ....DEATH

Written by NCPolice55571 / NR: Not Rated / 7.33 (6 ratings) (6)
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Author Rating Date Comment
Clark
Clark		 Mar 7, 2013
by Clark on Mar 7, 2013
Calen
Calen		 Jan 18, 2008
I'd give it a 8, but -1 point for grammar.

Still a great story.
by Calen on Jan 18, 2008
JeepNixon92
JeepNixon92		 Nov 28, 2006
by JeepNixon92 on Nov 28, 2006
Usoki
Usoki		 Oct 10, 2006
It's better in the fact that you're forced to go through more rooms to find out whether or not you lose. But it's frustrating in that it's purely luck.

Also, I don't see why you couldn't have just tacked this story onto the success end of your first work, instead of making two stories like this.
by Usoki on Oct 10, 2006
jeffisthebest
jeffisthebest		 Nov 15, 2004
Not as good as the quiz. You should do another one that has more riddles, but this story did get better as it went along.
by jeffisthebest on Nov 15, 2004
CJW
CJW		 Jan 21, 2004
The sequel to the Game Show of death, this equals if not goes beyond the first one.
by CJW on Jan 21, 2004

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