Risky Business

Written by rockitten / PG: Parental Guidance Suggested / 4.60 (5 ratings) (5)
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donteatpoop
donteatpoop		 Jul 2, 2005
The happy endings happen after one choice. "You don't try the heroine, you live happily ever after" type stuff. It almost makes you want to make stupid choices so that the story won't end on page three. Plus, describing the party wouldn't have been so bad.
by donteatpoop on Jul 2, 2005
jeffisthebest
jeffisthebest		 Nov 4, 2004
starts out good but rooms become too short
by jeffisthebest on Nov 4, 2004
EnderWiggin
EnderWiggin		 Jun 4, 2004
Pointless story with little depth...but I'll give it a couple of points because one of my good friends is in Sigma Nu.
by EnderWiggin on Jun 4, 2004
Rpgxper
Rpgxper		 Jan 29, 2004
Not bad I guess. It gives some good advice to the younger audience. Too many THE ENDs, though.
by Rpgxper on Jan 29, 2004
CJW
CJW		 Jan 16, 2004
This is the first finished story I have ever read. Congratulations.
by CJW on Jan 16, 2004

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