one day you slowly floated away

Comments & Ratings

Author	Rating	Date	Comment
donteatpoop		Oct 7, 2011	Don't want to rate it yet because it appears to still be a work in progress. I was pleasantly surprised, expecting to find the usual lollergazm gibberish that you find in stories with random-sounding titles. I still get the impression this story is going to turn into randomness, but hopefully not over-much. The writing quality was excellent though, especially in the rooms you chose to expand upon and actually write more than a few sentences. It seems like you have a subtle sub plot brewing behind it all, but maybe it only seems that way. Look forward to checking this one out down the road and seeing where it goes. by donteatpoop on Oct 7, 2011