Comments & Ratings
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||Mar 17, 2009||Pretty good, but could be a bit longer. Still, i supose it is more accurate. Although why didn't they dress you up in medeval clothing from the start?|
||Apr 23, 2008||I loved thsi story. I usually hate time-travelling items because its always ONLY in the medieval times. I don't like those kinds of movies and literature. However, you mixed the present with the past, allowed us to go to a few time zones, and you allow us to make mistakes. Great job, AgentRebellion, great job!|
||Dec 7, 2006||This was a very enjoyable story. I saw your post on the forum that you were bringing it back and adding on to it so I decided to give it a read. My complaints are that it borrowed to much from other time travel fiction (a lot from Timeline and Back to the Future) and it lacked that real originality. Still I think it deserves a 9. But, the fact that you are bringing it back to do more work I like, and I want to offset that low rating Chubby gave you so I will give you a 10. Please continue making additions!|
||Jun 25, 2006||It was brilliantly made, and really made me enjoy the concept of an infinite story! In fact, this was the first story I read that made me want to become a member just so I could write this review. I was in awe when I noticed that there were many, many possibilities to choose from, but I guess this is why it is called an infinite story. Anyway, I enjoyed exploring Medieval Times, World War II, and the Future. Each time period was beautifully written with quirky, funny moments that made me giggle a little. You are an exceptional writer, and I hope to see more stories!|
||Apr 6, 2006||I thoroughly enjoyed this story. The history is intelligently presented, and the consequences of time travel are repeated put before the reader. Excellent work.|
||Mar 22, 2006||Awesome story, especially since the adventure doesn't end at the medieval time. You can also go on to explore prehistoric times, WWII, and the Wild West. This story was written about three years ago and it still has much potential.|
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||Jan 21, 2006||
I'm only giving you a 10 because Michael gave you a 9 for not writing in Middle English.|
Michael, you are a dumbass.
||Aug 7, 2005||
I had my reservations about this story from the beginning. Chubby's comments didn't quell my enthusiasm so much as the threat that it was based off of Timeline. Very loosely based, thank God.|
An important (yet inherent) flaw in BOTH tales is that MIDDLE English was spoken at the time of knights and medieval battle, not Modern English (yes, even the "King's English" with the thees and thous is Modern). It would have been considerably harder to write in Middle English, which is why my foray into medieval settings (in Verisimilivirate) is done on a completely different world. Some things are best left untouched - like the Dark Ages. It wasn't a glorious time, and as much as I like the fictional accounts of it, I'd sooner lop off both my typing hands than go there.
Still, your story was fun. Hence, a decent rating.
||Jul 21, 2005||
Sorry. I know everyone else has given this story rave reviews, and in truth this story does a better job portraying time-travel than many movies concerning this complicated subject.|
There were just too many flaws. I could go on and on. As far as writing style goes, it was pretty much flawless. You're a good writer, you just picked the wrong subject matter this time around.
||Jul 12, 2005||Keep up the good work, a little more detail and a little more of an original plot would get you a 10.|
||Jun 15, 2005||Fantastic story. Much better than I expected in the beginning.|
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||Apr 8, 2004||This is a really good story. I like the writing style.|
||Jan 25, 2004||When I first saw the other ratings I didn't know how good of a story this could possibly be. Until I read. It's based off of Timeline, but the similarity mostly ends there. The descriptions are vivid and strong without overwhelming the page. It's logical to a degree so that it pays to make actual smart choices rather than what an author "chooses." Awesome story. Very awesome. Can't wait to read more.|
||Jan 11, 2004||This story is awesome! I'll give props to NCPolice as well for making this a great time travel adventure!|
||Jan 6, 2004||This is a great story! Please keep writing more! I'm looking forward to any new installment!|