Time Traveller

Written by AgentRebellion / G: General Audiences /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
zack218	Mar 10, 2017	by zack218 on Mar 10, 2017
BAPACop	Sep 9, 2013	by BAPACop on Sep 9, 2013
yamary	Oct 6, 2011	by yamary on Oct 6, 2011
Thiefswipe	Mar 17, 2009	Pretty good, but could be a bit longer. Still, i supose it is more accurate. Although why didn't they dress you up in medeval clothing from the start? by Thiefswipe on Mar 17, 2009
zaxoman	Apr 23, 2008	I loved thsi story. I usually hate time-travelling items because its always ONLY in the medieval times. I don't like those kinds of movies and literature. However, you mixed the present with the past, allowed us to go to a few time zones, and you allow us to make mistakes. Great job, AgentRebellion, great job! by zaxoman on Apr 23, 2008
apotheosis	Dec 7, 2006	This was a very enjoyable story. I saw your post on the forum that you were bringing it back and adding on to it so I decided to give it a read. My complaints are that it borrowed to much from other time travel fiction (a lot from Timeline and Back to the Future) and it lacked that real originality. Still I think it deserves a 9. But, the fact that you are bringing it back to do more work I like, and I want to offset that low rating Chubby gave you so I will give you a 10. Please continue making additions! by apotheosis on Dec 7, 2006
Seanathome	Jun 25, 2006	It was brilliantly made, and really made me enjoy the concept of an infinite story! In fact, this was the first story I read that made me want to become a member just so I could write this review. I was in awe when I noticed that there were many, many possibilities to choose from, but I guess this is why it is called an infinite story. Anyway, I enjoyed exploring Medieval Times, World War II, and the Future. Each time period was beautifully written with quirky, funny moments that made me giggle a little. You are an exceptional writer, and I hope to see more stories! by Seanathome on Jun 25, 2006
druidwolf	Apr 6, 2006	I thoroughly enjoyed this story. The history is intelligently presented, and the consequences of time travel are repeated put before the reader. Excellent work. by druidwolf on Apr 6, 2006
Dan2	Mar 22, 2006	Awesome story, especially since the adventure doesn't end at the medieval time. You can also go on to explore prehistoric times, WWII, and the Wild West. This story was written about three years ago and it still has much potential. by Dan2 on Mar 22, 2006
beautiful105	Feb 3, 2006	by beautiful105 on Feb 3, 2006
jeffisthebest	Jan 21, 2006	I'm only giving you a 10 because Michael gave you a 9 for not writing in Middle English. Michael, you are a dumbass. by jeffisthebest on Jan 21, 2006
michaelrayholt	Aug 7, 2005	I had my reservations about this story from the beginning. Chubby's comments didn't quell my enthusiasm so much as the threat that it was based off of Timeline. Very loosely based, thank God. An important (yet inherent) flaw in BOTH tales is that MIDDLE English was spoken at the time of knights and medieval battle, not Modern English (yes, even the "King's English" with the thees and thous is Modern). It would have been considerably harder to write in Middle English, which is why my foray into medieval settings (in Verisimilivirate) is done on a completely different world. Some things are best left untouched - like the Dark Ages. It wasn't a glorious time, and as much as I like the fictional accounts of it, I'd sooner lop off both my typing hands than go there. Still, your story was fun. Hence, a decent rating. by michaelrayholt on Aug 7, 2005
ChubbyTeletubby	Jul 21, 2005	Sorry. I know everyone else has given this story rave reviews, and in truth this story does a better job portraying time-travel than many movies concerning this complicated subject. There were just too many flaws. I could go on and on. As far as writing style goes, it was pretty much flawless. You're a good writer, you just picked the wrong subject matter this time around. by ChubbyTeletubby on Jul 21, 2005
YazZMaN	Jul 12, 2005	Keep up the good work, a little more detail and a little more of an original plot would get you a 10. by YazZMaN on Jul 12, 2005
donteatpoop	Jun 15, 2005	Fantastic story. Much better than I expected in the beginning. by donteatpoop on Jun 15, 2005
DigitalRosh	Jan 29, 2005	by DigitalRosh on Jan 29, 2005
Wackojacko83	May 26, 2004	by Wackojacko83 on May 26, 2004
lioness1081	Apr 8, 2004	This is a really good story. I like the writing style. by lioness1081 on Apr 8, 2004
CJW	Jan 25, 2004	When I first saw the other ratings I didn't know how good of a story this could possibly be. Until I read. It's based off of Timeline, but the similarity mostly ends there. The descriptions are vivid and strong without overwhelming the page. It's logical to a degree so that it pays to make actual smart choices rather than what an author "chooses." Awesome story. Very awesome. Can't wait to read more. by CJW on Jan 25, 2004
EnderWiggin	Jan 11, 2004	This story is awesome! I'll give props to NCPolice as well for making this a great time travel adventure! by EnderWiggin on Jan 11, 2004
dragon05	Jan 6, 2004	This is a great story! Please keep writing more! I'm looking forward to any new installment! by dragon05 on Jan 6, 2004

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