The ring must be destroyed Pt.1

Written by wn101 / R: Restricted - Adult / 6.00 (1 ratings) (1)
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imphic
imphic		 Jan 2, 2012
Not a bad start. I would like to see more details and action in the story. The images are good, especially the illustrations. You should continue.
by imphic on Jan 2, 2012

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