The World

Written by Ghizzard / MA: Mature Audiences - Adult / 1.50 (2 ratings) (2)
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Artazansss
Artazansss		 Jul 26, 2011
by Artazansss on Jul 26, 2011
TheCandyMan
TheCandyMan		 Jul 23, 2011
Seriously? Where's the back story? Nobody's going to really be motivated to contribute to this 'story' if you haven't even done one page, you could've at least done a paragraph, perhaps giving people the enthusiasm and motivation to contribute to this work. I'm gonna make an additional point for the attempt though. It may have been a useless one, but if you just put a little effort into it, this could become popular, this has had 504 hits. Imagine at least half, or a quarter of those people adding and adding to it. This would become amazing! Well..Nowhere near Athopeosis' contribution levels.

OVER NINE-THOOUUSAAAAAAAAANNDD!!!
by TheCandyMan on Jul 23, 2011

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