Comments & Ratings
|This is a great story! Keep up the good work. UwU|
|it is a good story but could use better punctuation, grammar and capitalization.|
|kick ass man just one thing THERE IS NO ENDING.|
|there are a few typos but other than that it is prity kool|
Normally, this would just be a 9 as usual for a good NCPolice story with the usual spelling errors...|
but I let the anger sharks swimming in my head convince me that the general shittiness of the movie had somehow rubbed off on this story.
|Badass story man. I just don't know enough about that stuff to add good rooms.|