"TOP GUN"

Written by NCPolice55571 / NR: Not Rated /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
PotatoCaptain	Jul 25, 2019	Really good story, keep up the good work! by PotatoCaptain on Jul 25, 2019
FizzWolf	Feb 27, 2019	This is a great story! Keep up the good work. UwU by FizzWolf on Feb 27, 2019
borritoboss	Jan 22, 2019	it is a good story but could use better punctuation, grammar and capitalization. by borritoboss on Jan 22, 2019
silentninja	May 3, 2010	Nice by silentninja on May 3, 2010
Bigbadmonkey	Jan 25, 2009	kick ass man just one thing THERE IS NO ENDING. by Bigbadmonkey on Jan 25, 2009
zaphod54	Apr 18, 2008	there are a few typos but other than that it is prity kool by zaphod54 on Apr 18, 2008
michaelrayholt	Aug 7, 2005	Normally, this would just be a 9 as usual for a good NCPolice story with the usual spelling errors... but I let the anger sharks swimming in my head convince me that the general shittiness of the movie had somehow rubbed off on this story. Gooooooose-frabbah... by michaelrayholt on Aug 7, 2005
Karold	Nov 26, 2004	'NICE' by Karold on Nov 26, 2004
packratt5454	Sep 24, 2004	Badass story man. I just don't know enough about that stuff to add good rooms. by packratt5454 on Sep 24, 2004