Zombie Apocalypse.

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Great story! Your dedication to excellence, the inclusion of metals, and the way the game becomes harder and harder are really great. Some kind of hand to hand combat resolution system would be nice. However, I have made such thing for other games, and I understand that they can be difficult to build and slow down the game. The system you have currently is the next best thing, and it's almost better than my suggestion (for above reasons). That was great.

By the way, I got the Bronze, Silver, and Platinum metals. I am assuming there is a Gold metal, but I must have missed it. Is that because of bad decisions?
by Lightning11wins on Oct 23, 2019
by Storymaker on Aug 17, 2019
Great story ,an ending . I would like to try and make my own story . How long did it take you ?
by donjuan336 on Aug 15, 2019
End is so CUTE (Ending 3). Best story ever!
by RetroDestruction on Jul 14, 2019
Very good. Lots of options and the story is structured very well, however ending 2/3 had some “flashback” moments that I didn’t experience. Other than that it was amazing!
by Gigii on May 29, 2019
Love it 👌
by Spicylikeflour on Apr 25, 2019
by NotyourProtag on Nov 9, 2018
This is an awesome story ^-^
by FictionLV on Oct 28, 2018
I've actually read this twice, once two years ago and again today. I'm basing this review on both occasions.
It was quite good, it was intriguing and the "smarts" test was a nice little spice to add to the story. Although, the incorrect decisions were too obvious, even after the "less-obvious" warning. It was still a very entertaining story, and I thoroughly enjoyed it.
by NoProblemsHere on Aug 17, 2018
by dylan991 on Mar 7, 2017
by Mcguires62 on Dec 28, 2016
by Creeper909 on Jul 4, 2016
Good work. It's probably the best zombie story I've read here so far.
My reinforcing feedback is that I liked its completeness and the story have a strong internal logic. My constructive feedback is to flesh out (pardon me) the other characters a bit more and establish the setting some.
Still, well done overall.
by imphic on May 27, 2012
I feel like such a noob XD
by squishydemon on Jan 13, 2012
Thank you all for great feedback!
by squishydemon on Jan 13, 2012
Finished it- got every ending!

Love how hard it is to die. Good zombie story. Some of the pages didn't match up to the plot that happened before it though. Might have been better executed on chooseyourstory.com with its variables.
by urnam0 on Jan 12, 2012
This is good. I mean the potential for this story is limitless! I enjoy the fact that so far, you've stuck to your word about having death be something that won't happen immediately after making a choice. I personally think its sort of suspenseful, especially since you've added in a morality system that has me constantly doubting myself (to go to the house, or not to go to the house...).

If I can offer any sort of critique, it'd be personal, menial things like fleshing out more detail in your story, making it harder to just shoot a teammate. I know you probably weren't taking characterization into consideration when making this but if you ever do something like this in the future, making believable characters will earn you a ton of comments and inspiration to keep on writing.

I'd also like to see a more 'gamebook' feel to this. Perhaps a morality bar when we are given a reward so we know where we stand with our teammates?

All in all, solid piece of work, you squishy demon!
by cooldude1692 on Jan 9, 2012
I like it. It's not finished but it's not your usual zombie story, and I like the hard to die part.
by urnam0 on Jun 22, 2011
Thank you all for your great feed back!
by squishydemon on Jun 21, 2011
It managed to hold my attention and I think there's a lot of potential here, but it's still pretty bare bones (no real detail at all in descriptions, and at the moment you eventually wind up at the same place no matter what you pick) and it's hard to rate it at this stage. Looking forward to seeing where you go with this if you do wind up expanding it though.
by mizal on Jun 16, 2011
I like it :) lawl
by TheCandyMan on Apr 16, 2011

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