Comments & Ratings
||Oct 23, 2019||
Great story! Your dedication to excellence, the inclusion of metals, and the way the game becomes harder and harder are really great. Some kind of hand to hand combat resolution system would be nice. However, I have made such thing for other games, and I understand that they can be difficult to build and slow down the game. The system you have currently is the next best thing, and it's almost better than my suggestion (for above reasons). That was great.|
By the way, I got the Bronze, Silver, and Platinum metals. I am assuming there is a Gold metal, but I must have missed it. Is that because of bad decisions?
||Aug 17, 2019|
||Aug 15, 2019||Great story ,an ending . I would like to try and make my own story . How long did it take you ?|
||Jul 14, 2019||End is so CUTE (Ending 3). Best story ever!|
||May 29, 2019||Very good. Lots of options and the story is structured very well, however ending 2/3 had some “flashback” moments that I didn’t experience. Other than that it was amazing!|
||Apr 25, 2019||Love it 👌|
||Nov 9, 2018|
||Oct 28, 2018||This is an awesome story ^-^|
||Aug 17, 2018||
I've actually read this twice, once two years ago and again today. I'm basing this review on both occasions.|
It was quite good, it was intriguing and the "smarts" test was a nice little spice to add to the story. Although, the incorrect decisions were too obvious, even after the "less-obvious" warning. It was still a very entertaining story, and I thoroughly enjoyed it.
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||Dec 28, 2016|
||Jul 4, 2016||EPIC!!!|
||May 27, 2012||
Good work. It's probably the best zombie story I've read here so far. |
My reinforcing feedback is that I liked its completeness and the story have a strong internal logic. My constructive feedback is to flesh out (pardon me) the other characters a bit more and establish the setting some.
Still, well done overall.
||Jan 13, 2012||I feel like such a noob XD|
||Jan 13, 2012||Thank you all for great feedback!|
||Jan 12, 2012||
Finished it- got every ending!|
Love how hard it is to die. Good zombie story. Some of the pages didn't match up to the plot that happened before it though. Might have been better executed on chooseyourstory.com with its variables.
||Jan 9, 2012||
This is good. I mean the potential for this story is limitless! I enjoy the fact that so far, you've stuck to your word about having death be something that won't happen immediately after making a choice. I personally think its sort of suspenseful, especially since you've added in a morality system that has me constantly doubting myself (to go to the house, or not to go to the house...). |
If I can offer any sort of critique, it'd be personal, menial things like fleshing out more detail in your story, making it harder to just shoot a teammate. I know you probably weren't taking characterization into consideration when making this but if you ever do something like this in the future, making believable characters will earn you a ton of comments and inspiration to keep on writing.
I'd also like to see a more 'gamebook' feel to this. Perhaps a morality bar when we are given a reward so we know where we stand with our teammates?
All in all, solid piece of work, you squishy demon!
||Jun 22, 2011||I like it. It's not finished but it's not your usual zombie story, and I like the hard to die part.|
||Jun 21, 2011||Thank you all for your great feed back!|
||Jun 16, 2011||It managed to hold my attention and I think there's a lot of potential here, but it's still pretty bare bones (no real detail at all in descriptions, and at the moment you eventually wind up at the same place no matter what you pick) and it's hard to rate it at this stage. Looking forward to seeing where you go with this if you do wind up expanding it though.|
||Apr 16, 2011||I like it :) lawl|