Zombie Apocalypse.

Written by squishydemon / PG: Parental Guidance Suggested /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
n0mn0m	Aug 12, 2021	I only got one ending "Gold Medal, I survived", but I found this very entertaining and intriguing! I loved how some parts I doubted myself and how parts I was confident, but most of the time I had no clue what the author had planned. Thank you, Author, for this incredible story! by n0mn0m on Aug 12, 2021
SprinklesSith	Jun 22, 2021	Very nice. There was clearly A LOT of work put into this. I only played to get one ending, bit it was fun. (SPOILER) My only complaint is that at the farm house, there's not an option to knock but have weapons equipped. Not that it mattered much in the end. by SprinklesSith on Jun 22, 2021
Lightning11wins	Oct 23, 2019	Great story! Your dedication to excellence, the inclusion of metals, and the way the game becomes harder and harder are really great. Some kind of hand to hand combat resolution system would be nice. However, I have made such thing for other games, and I understand that they can be difficult to build and slow down the game. The system you have currently is the next best thing, and it's almost better than my suggestion (for above reasons). That was great. By the way, I got the Bronze, Silver, and Platinum metals. I am assuming there is a Gold metal, but I must have missed it. Is that because of bad decisions? by Lightning11wins on Oct 23, 2019
Storymaker	Aug 17, 2019	by Storymaker on Aug 17, 2019
donjuan336	Aug 15, 2019	Great story ,an ending . I would like to try and make my own story . How long did it take you ? by donjuan336 on Aug 15, 2019
RetroDestruction	Jul 14, 2019	End is so CUTE (Ending 3). Best story ever! by RetroDestruction on Jul 14, 2019
Gigii	May 29, 2019	Very good. Lots of options and the story is structured very well, however ending 2/3 had some “flashback” moments that I didn’t experience. Other than that it was amazing! by Gigii on May 29, 2019
Spicylikeflour	Apr 25, 2019	Love it 👌 by Spicylikeflour on Apr 25, 2019
NotyourProtag	Nov 9, 2018	by NotyourProtag on Nov 9, 2018
FictionLV	Oct 28, 2018	This is an awesome story ^-^ by FictionLV on Oct 28, 2018
NoProblemsHere	Aug 17, 2018	I've actually read this twice, once two years ago and again today. I'm basing this review on both occasions. It was quite good, it was intriguing and the "smarts" test was a nice little spice to add to the story. Although, the incorrect decisions were too obvious, even after the "less-obvious" warning. It was still a very entertaining story, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. -NPH by NoProblemsHere on Aug 17, 2018
dylan991	Mar 7, 2017	by dylan991 on Mar 7, 2017
Mcguires62	Dec 28, 2016	by Mcguires62 on Dec 28, 2016
Creeper909	Jul 4, 2016	EPIC!!! by Creeper909 on Jul 4, 2016
imphic	May 27, 2012	Good work. It's probably the best zombie story I've read here so far. My reinforcing feedback is that I liked its completeness and the story have a strong internal logic. My constructive feedback is to flesh out (pardon me) the other characters a bit more and establish the setting some. Still, well done overall. by imphic on May 27, 2012
squishydemon	Jan 13, 2012	I feel like such a noob XD by squishydemon on Jan 13, 2012
squishydemon	Jan 13, 2012	Thank you all for great feedback! by squishydemon on Jan 13, 2012
urnam0	Jan 12, 2012	Finished it- got every ending! Love how hard it is to die. Good zombie story. Some of the pages didn't match up to the plot that happened before it though. Might have been better executed on chooseyourstory.com with its variables. by urnam0 on Jan 12, 2012
cooldude1692	Jan 9, 2012	This is good. I mean the potential for this story is limitless! I enjoy the fact that so far, you've stuck to your word about having death be something that won't happen immediately after making a choice. I personally think its sort of suspenseful, especially since you've added in a morality system that has me constantly doubting myself (to go to the house, or not to go to the house...). If I can offer any sort of critique, it'd be personal, menial things like fleshing out more detail in your story, making it harder to just shoot a teammate. I know you probably weren't taking characterization into consideration when making this but if you ever do something like this in the future, making believable characters will earn you a ton of comments and inspiration to keep on writing. I'd also like to see a more 'gamebook' feel to this. Perhaps a morality bar when we are given a reward so we know where we stand with our teammates? All in all, solid piece of work, you squishy demon! by cooldude1692 on Jan 9, 2012
urnam0	Jun 22, 2011	I like it. It's not finished but it's not your usual zombie story, and I like the hard to die part. by urnam0 on Jun 22, 2011
squishydemon	Jun 21, 2011	Thank you all for your great feed back! by squishydemon on Jun 21, 2011
mizal	Jun 16, 2011	It managed to hold my attention and I think there's a lot of potential here, but it's still pretty bare bones (no real detail at all in descriptions, and at the moment you eventually wind up at the same place no matter what you pick) and it's hard to rate it at this stage. Looking forward to seeing where you go with this if you do wind up expanding it though. by mizal on Jun 16, 2011
TheCandyMan	Apr 16, 2011	I like it :) lawl by TheCandyMan on Apr 16, 2011

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