Life as a superhero/villian
Comments & Ratings
Author | Rating | Date | Comment |
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Creeper909![]() |
Mar 21, 2015 | Come ON. Too many loose ends.(I have meany loose ends in SOME of my stories, but I work on multiple at a time.) You had the right idea, though. Keep working on it! | |
Lackofmop![]() |
Jul 5, 2013 | It's good so far, but you need to finish it. | |
TheCandyMan![]() |
May 27, 2011 | Well...think about it, how about not asking if you kept it a secret, and you should finish off this story, not other people, you should at least give the reader the details of the plot, I've helped with a few rooms, but really, you should do this, then give an idea of how to start the story so we've got a better idea, it's pointless if I write the rest of this story. | |
squishydemon![]() |
Apr 12, 2011 | You have inspired me to make a story kind of like this. If I do make this story, I will give props to you. |
Good job. You have inspired me.|
squishydemon![]() |
Apr 12, 2011 | It's just that a lot of it isn't finished yet. I would love to make something like this. Umm, hello, whoever created this game, I'm gonna steal your idea, okay? Don't worry, if I do make a game like this, I will give props to you. Is that okay? |
What? Come on, this was a REALLY neat concept in my opinion! I was actually having some fun!|
TheCandyMan![]() |
Mar 25, 2011 | Well what else did I expect..? |
This is unfinished and..not a great story lol