wired pokemon adventure

Written by jaker / R: Restricted - Adult / 1.00 (5 ratings) (5)
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Lackofmop
Lackofmop		 Jul 5, 2013
awful
by Lackofmop on Jul 5, 2013
donteatpoop
donteatpoop		 Feb 18, 2012
I'm struggling to find something positive to say. I'm convinced you meant to say "Weird Pokemon Adventure" but were too dumb to spell weird correctly. In the fucking title.

Anyway, I guess I'll just offer you some tips to improve you writing. So... Sentences begin with CAPITAL LETTERS and end with punctuation. Thank you.
by donteatpoop on Feb 18, 2012
Adamented
Adamented		 Feb 4, 2011
Ok....this has got to be one of the sorriest excuses of a story on here. To be able to actually be entertained from this story would be to have an IQ under 50. Bad spelling, bad sentence, BAD STORY!
by Adamented on Feb 4, 2011
Calen
Calen		 Jan 21, 2011
Horrible... just... awful.
Learn to spell... and write coherently... and... create plot... and sentences, and use words.
by Calen on Jan 21, 2011
YazZMaN
YazZMaN		 Jan 20, 2011
You deserve this and you know it.
by YazZMaN on Jan 20, 2011

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