The End
Comments & Ratings
| Author | Rating | Date | Comment |
|---|---|---|---|
TheCandyMan |
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Jul 31, 2011 | Perhaps not making so many damn choices would have given you the motivation to actually start the story. Hmph. Nice start. Nice plot. Great grammar, yet there are a few spelling mistakes. But I needn't get into that. It's the story. I enjoyed reading through it, but as you made so many choices, you cannot fill them all in. So why should I bother reading through all the choices only to find nothing...Hmm? Six - It's average. It deserves more, but as you cannot finish this, it cannot go any higher. Can it? Hmm... |