The Cronicles of Dick Face (you)

Written by stormdaku / R: Restricted - Adult /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
TheCandyMan	May 15, 2011	Why are you writing a story? You can't write a story unless you have something called a PLOT line, and at least be matured enough to SPELL correctly. Needs better grammar, and it has to make sense. KHGQ dsgqkhrwe3 KREHBGKLJEB4;HVE UITRBN/HK5U9WGKHU53;4P TRANSLATION: you die. That just isn't acceptable. I'm gonna be generous, and give you a 3. by TheCandyMan on May 15, 2011
EndMaster	Jan 6, 2011	If you're going to make a story insulting the reader and trying to be offensive, it has to be funny. You can't just vomit on the screen and call it comedy. Well, actually that might be slightly more amusing than this story. In short, the next time you feel the urge to type in a bunch of misspelled swear words, go back to your NAMBLA chatroom. by EndMaster on Jan 6, 2011
YazZMaN	Jan 4, 2011	If the main character believes his one-your-year old baby thinks he's a dumb ass, then yes, he certainly IS a dumb ass! Anyway, I couldn't even fight through the first couple rooms. by YazZMaN on Jan 4, 2011