Avater The Last Firebender

Written by tgoodner12 / G: General Audiences /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Rating	Date	Comment
Bidoofis		Jul 15, 2017	This story is downright terrible. The endings are so plentiful, making it so, out of a group of choices, only one is right. Also, Avater. Really? by Bidoofis on Jul 15, 2017
Lackofmop		Jul 13, 2013	Wow, this is terrible. The endings are so abrupt. Also, (and this is the main reason for your low score) you have to use quotation marks ("") whenever characters talk. by Lackofmop on Jul 13, 2013