Avater The Last Firebender

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Author Rating Date Comment
Jul 15, 2017
This story is downright terrible. The endings are so plentiful, making it so, out of a group of choices, only one is right. Also, Avater. Really?
by Bidoofis on Jul 15, 2017
Jul 13, 2013
Wow, this is terrible. The endings are so abrupt. Also, (and this is the main reason for your low score) you have to use quotation marks ("") whenever characters talk.
by Lackofmop on Jul 13, 2013

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