League of Legends
Comments & Ratings
Author | Rating | Date | Comment |
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LexXArcher |
May 24, 2014 | This story only "works" if someone is a regular LoL player... but even then, they'd get more enjoyment from actually playing the game itself. I'd suggest a re-write where you go the "fan fic" route, and either expand the canonical bios of 3-4 characters, or else elaborate on your favorite 3-4 characters' assumed identities (what you alone imagine them to be like). That would be far more fun to read. |