"The Dragon's Last Breath"

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
DanielHS11	Oct 5, 2019	by DanielHS11 on Oct 5, 2019
Corgi289	Aug 31, 2019	This could be better. Although its not bad you could still go through and fix some of the spelling errors. Such as "safty" as opposed to safety, and "except" which should be accept. by Corgi289 on Aug 31, 2019
PotatoCaptain	Jul 25, 2019	Pretty good, much better than my stories (I didn’t even bother trying to make my stories good) by PotatoCaptain on Jul 25, 2019
Dameon	Sep 26, 2018	pretty good though i feel you could have tried too make it seem more realistic not criticizing just trying to help. by Dameon on Sep 26, 2018
jp33	Apr 12, 2006	by jp33 on Apr 12, 2006
ChubbyTeletubby	Apr 11, 2006	Great story, for what it is. Great blend of pictures and yes, even actual WORDS. Masterful use of the English language, even. My two favorite lines in the story? "Mmmmmm....Zavier, I want to feel every inch of your muscularity." And... "Thrust your hardness deep into me Zavier. I want to feel you." HA! Oh, man. Classic. Absolutely classic. Love it. Great job. by ChubbyTeletubby on Apr 11, 2006
donteatpoop	Aug 2, 2005	Not a bad story, but some of the writing that people put into it was of poor quality. You should edit the story to make these poorly written rooms less painful to read. The other problem I found in the story (which resulted in the low rating) is that the dialogue seemed so forced and unrealistic. Nice story idea though, and I hope you come back to the site and work on it some more. Word to your mother. by donteatpoop on Aug 2, 2005
NCPolice55571	Sep 27, 2004	Great story, great pics used. The story is one of the best I've read. by NCPolice55571 on Sep 27, 2004
Ziff26966	Aug 11, 2004	by Ziff26966 on Aug 11, 2004
Max143	Jul 30, 2004	Very nice graphics! This is one of the best stories I've played! by Max143 on Jul 30, 2004

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