Will you die or fall in love?

Written by DejectedFate / R: Restricted - Adult / 1.75 (4 ratings) (4)
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Author Rating Date Comment
Lackofmop
Lackofmop		 Jul 14, 2013
Horrible.
by Lackofmop on Jul 14, 2013
Artazansss
Artazansss		 Sep 25, 2011
by Artazansss on Sep 25, 2011
thecarioca
thecarioca		 Aug 28, 2010
by thecarioca on Aug 28, 2010
Calen
Calen		 Aug 6, 2010
You need to work on your grammar to make it look more professional. There's no real "Fall in love" option in the story, and it's far too short. Characters aren't developed, all I know is she's with a crazy guy who thinks she's hot, and decides to kiss him- unsatisfying endings. But it did intrigue me, if only for the idea. Keep working on it. :)
by Calen on Aug 6, 2010

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