A date with happiness

Written by LolaM / PG: Parental Guidance Suggested / 4.80 (5 ratings) (5)
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Mlhughes
Mlhughes		 Nov 26, 2019
by Mlhughes on Nov 26, 2019
ThatsAlright
ThatsAlright		 Jul 12, 2019
by ThatsAlright on Jul 12, 2019
Minichibi
Minichibi		 Oct 9, 2017
by Minichibi on Oct 9, 2017
donteatpoop
donteatpoop		 Feb 23, 2012
I feel like I've finally found a story that taps into the vastly ignored market of squirrels. I feel like they would like this story if it had more nuts in it. Obviously this wasn't written for humans, so I won't waste your time commenting on grammer or spelling or plot lines. Instead I'd like you to think about your target audience; the squirrels. Nuts. You need to write more about nuts. Acorns. Maybe trees and running away from dogs. That sort of thing.
by donteatpoop on Feb 23, 2012
stormdaku
stormdaku		 Dec 28, 2010
by stormdaku on Dec 28, 2010

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