A date with happiness

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by Minichibi on Oct 9, 2017
I feel like I've finally found a story that taps into the vastly ignored market of squirrels. I feel like they would like this story if it had more nuts in it. Obviously this wasn't written for humans, so I won't waste your time commenting on grammer or spelling or plot lines. Instead I'd like you to think about your target audience; the squirrels. Nuts. You need to write more about nuts. Acorns. Maybe trees and running away from dogs. That sort of thing.
by donteatpoop on Feb 23, 2012
by stormdaku on Dec 28, 2010

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