The Best of the Worst

Written by Turdyollo / G: General Audiences / 6.25 (4 ratings) (4)
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donteatpoop
donteatpoop		 Apr 28, 2012
I'm not even sure what to say of this story. Needs a lot of editing work. Your dialogue is rushed and awkward. You need to use descriptive wording.

Still though, far from the worst thing on here. If that's not a depressing statement I'm not sure what is.
by donteatpoop on Apr 28, 2012
Artazansss
Artazansss		 Sep 4, 2011
Not good...not good at all a lot of unfinished rooms and unoriginal story.
by Artazansss on Sep 4, 2011
EndMaster
EndMaster		 Jan 3, 2011
I guess it isn't the worst story on the site.

I'll give it an extra point since I think one the contributors mentioned in their profile to go easy on them.
by EndMaster on Jan 3, 2011
LittleRobinForever
LittleRobinForever		 May 28, 2010
Very nice!!
by LittleRobinForever on May 28, 2010
LittleRobinForever
LittleRobinForever		 May 28, 2010
Tis is a good story. I can not wait for more, so keep on writing!!!
=)
by LittleRobinForever on May 28, 2010

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