the sommoning

Written by jabt123 / R: Restricted - Adult /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
TheCandyMan	Jul 24, 2011	Whoa did I reall rate this a 6? What the hell? Have I been hacked or something? This has terrible grammar, terrible spelling and no damn paragraphs. What the hell was I thinking? I would have given this a 5 or 4 for effort. But damn this is unreadable. I couldn't have possibly given this a 6..And said that this is good. Has somebody else used my computer lately...Hmm... TheCandyMan Wow.. by TheCandyMan on Jul 24, 2011
TheCandyMan	Apr 26, 2011	It's a nice story, imaginative and nicely wrote, but you need to get your grammar and spellings correct. You need to think more about what you're writing, and get your ideas straight, then you'll have a proper story. Good luck with that. :) by TheCandyMan on Apr 26, 2011
TheCandyMan	Apr 26, 2011	It's a nice story, imaginative and nicely wrote, but you need to get your grammar and spellings correct. You need to think more about what you're writing, and get your ideas straight, then you'll have a proper story. Good luck with that. :) by TheCandyMan on Apr 26, 2011