Comments & Ratings
||Jun 1, 2019|
||May 18, 2013||Ok, but very short and too many duplicate pages.|
||Mar 7, 2013||A lot of fun. How about a sequel?|
||Apr 19, 2010||
Unfortunately I'm so busy I could only read about 5 or 6 rooms, but it looks really good so far. There weren't many spelling errors and you kept the story going at a good pace.|
I'd recommend breaking up your writing into paragraphs (just hit "enter" twice) and shortening down the words included in the choice links, but this is good stuff.