The Virus

Written by CYOAWritersGuild / NR: Not Rated /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
writer22	Oct 30, 2006	Not good at all. You need to put more effort in this story... I dont understand the point of this story and the choices were kind of silly. Try to develop the plot more also. by writer22 on Oct 30, 2006
apotheosis	Jul 26, 2006	I didn't see a real point or purpose to it...and the plot needs some serious work. by apotheosis on Jul 26, 2006
tanasdapsycho	Jul 9, 2006	The only part that dealt with a virus was the second room. Very dull, dumb choices. by tanasdapsycho on Jul 9, 2006
ChubbyTeletubby	Jul 13, 2005	I got past page one and couldn't bring myself to read any further. Go take some 7th grade-level English classes and come back when you can spell and use proper grammar. by ChubbyTeletubby on Jul 13, 2005
jeffisthebest	Nov 5, 2004	After reading the Ronin story I felt this one paled in comparision. You people need to use quotes so the reader can tell who is speaking. by jeffisthebest on Nov 5, 2004