Bet You Can't Kill Yourself

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Agreed. It really is a great idea. I'll admit, though, I got a little frustrated after a while...
by Sapphire13 on Feb 9, 2017
This isn't R though.
by Clark on Mar 6, 2013
Nah. It's Ok. But it's pretty boring, you could've made it much more funnier. I suppose you put some effort to create this story. This part is unfinished:

You should've put a lot more effort into this to make it a good humorous story. I liked it nevertheless.
by TheCandyMan on May 31, 2011
Gets most points for originality and grammar. I think this could be an hilarious story, but I would maybe flesh out the rooms and try to make more of a plot.

In other words, I wouldn't use the setup where you just pick a way to kill yourself and then see if your idea fails or works; I feel like there should be some sort of story running in the background.
by YazZMaN on May 13, 2010

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