Comments & Ratings
|Agreed. It really is a great idea. I'll admit, though, I got a little frustrated after a while...|
|This isn't R though.|
Nah. It's Ok. But it's pretty boring, you could've made it much more funnier. I suppose you put some effort to create this story. This part is unfinished: http://www.infinite-story.com/choice/168813/?room=86306 |
You should've put a lot more effort into this to make it a good humorous story. I liked it nevertheless.
Gets most points for originality and grammar. I think this could be an hilarious story, but I would maybe flesh out the rooms and try to make more of a plot.|
In other words, I wouldn't use the setup where you just pick a way to kill yourself and then see if your idea fails or works; I feel like there should be some sort of story running in the background.