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The Pendant

Written by purplelotus / MA: Mature Audiences - Adult / 6.00 (1 ratings) (1)
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TheCandyMan
TheCandyMan		 Jul 27, 2011
Sorry about that, I was developing as a reviewer and writer back then and I must say that this story is just...Not perfect. I'd give this a 5 for effort - However, it's just too...This story is just how you would write out the plot, this doesn't appear to even be a story. Even though you spelt correctly, and the grammar is pretty much to my satisfaction, there are no paragraphs to separate the story. I have nothing but distaste for this story. Forget my review.

TheCandyMan
by TheCandyMan on Jul 27, 2011
TheCandyMan
TheCandyMan		 May 21, 2011
Really good. I can't find anything bad to say about it. Except the fact that it needs to be finished.
by TheCandyMan on May 21, 2011

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