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YazZMaN
YazZMaN
Jan 11, 2011
The grammar and the randomness towards the end of the story is what's preventing me from rating it any higher. Still, this reads a lot better than most of the stuff on the site and I even found the first couple rooms to be somewhat interesting.

Work on your grammar, make the plot a little bit more coherent, and I think you'll eventually be able to make something worthy of at least an 8.
by YazZMaN on Jan 11, 2011

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