The Adventure of Adventurely Adventuring!

Written by ianfort / PG: Parental Guidance Suggested /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Rating	Date	Comment
Thickskullman		May 24, 2013	Another one of those silly, random, anything goes 'story'. by Thickskullman on May 24, 2013
TheCandyMan		May 2, 2011	Oh how rude of me. My username is: TheCandyMan. And I don't usually talk this way. by TheCandyMan on May 2, 2011
TheCandyMan		May 2, 2011	by TheCandyMan on May 2, 2011
TheCandyMan		May 2, 2011	An enthusiastically fun story, you should get it finished, I understand the delay, you should decrease the amount of choices so the story doesn't become TOO random and the plot goes in the wrong direction, thus, losing every idea possible, you'll gradually find yourself having no ideas left and forced to delete your story and start over. I myself have gone through this stage frustratedly, otherwise, this is a fun and well written story, despite the fact not much has been achieved yet, it has great potential. All this writing could have been for my own story, but I decided generously to give you a thumbs up and a well done. I would also give you a 6/10, but due to my stupid generosity ande kindness, I will give you a 9/10. Haha. by TheCandyMan on May 2, 2011
magic		May 2, 2010	Very good, actually. Not bad. It's very easy to understand and has a lot of humor with a bunch of creativity. Keep on rockin' new stories! :) by magic on May 2, 2010
LeihsDemuriel		Jan 22, 2010	I like your story! It's random and funny, and the rooms are short so you can get to the choice faster. It's really good! You should read my random story and tell me what you think! by LeihsDemuriel on Jan 22, 2010