The Great Adventure

Written by joopjoop1234 / PG: Parental Guidance Suggested / 6.25 (4 ratings) (4)
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Author Rating Date Comment
Lackofmop
Lackofmop		 Jul 5, 2013
It's okay. Needs to be longer.
by Lackofmop on Jul 5, 2013
Clark
Clark		 Apr 5, 2013
by Clark on Apr 5, 2013
LeihsDemuriel
LeihsDemuriel		 Jan 22, 2010
Interesting little story! Your rooms are short and to the point; good job. However, I was kind of disappointed it didn't go on for longer!
by LeihsDemuriel on Jan 22, 2010
magic
magic		 Dec 31, 2009
Not so great.
by magic on Dec 31, 2009

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