POKEMON

Written by boomsniper77 / G: General Audiences / 6.50 (2 ratings) (2)
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YazZMaN
YazZMaN		 May 29, 2009
I'm not a fan of Pokemon, but this story looks okay compared to the other fan fiction on this site.

Basically, I think you need to write using more details and your story doesn't branch enough (although it looks like that might change as the reader progresses). I like the way the beginning of the story is set up, though.

Not sure why.

Keep at it, dude.
by YazZMaN on May 29, 2009
Dan2
Dan2		 May 26, 2009
Lol, even though I haven't really ever cared for pokemon stories..I like the concept you have of battling.
by Dan2 on May 26, 2009

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