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an exciting adventure
Written by
pokedude3
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TheCandyMan
May 25, 2011
Bad grammar, there's no plot line in this story, terrible description, with nothing but one sentence and choices that go nowhere. I'll be generous by giving you a 3.
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TheCandyMan
on May 25, 2011
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