an exciting adventure

Written by pokedude3 / G: General Audiences / 3.00 (1 ratings) (1)
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TheCandyMan
TheCandyMan		 May 25, 2011
Bad grammar, there's no plot line in this story, terrible description, with nothing but one sentence and choices that go nowhere. I'll be generous by giving you a 3.
by TheCandyMan on May 25, 2011

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