Comments & Ratings
||Jul 13, 2013||Quaint language at times, but oddly fitting.|
||Jan 3, 2011||
While it looks like a lot of time and effort was put into the story, the problem I'm having is that it follows the video game a little too closely, like you just wrote in the description text from the game and posted screen shots without the text. You might as well have just posted a "Let's play Shadowgate" thread if you were going to do that.|
However, I'm going to give you the benefit of the doubt since my memory is foggy on the game (Been a long time since I played it) and I can't actually see any text copying from the screenshots that I've seen on mobygames. (Though maybe you were smart enough to check that site first!) If I was really feeling ambitious I suppose I'd watch a youtube longplay of it or download the game and check that way, but quite frankly that's too much bother and it's not that serious.
Anyway, good work if it was all original writing. Good con job, if you fooled everybody. Either way you get an 8.
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||Nov 21, 2009||
Great work here, Fezero. Excellent writing. You've done a great job with your description. Only draw back I found is that I would have liked to know what the character was doing entering this gate in the first place, like what's the point?|
Great writing though. Hope to read more.
||Apr 9, 2009|
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