D-Saga: The Code of the Saga Clan

Written by purplelotus / MA: Mature Audiences - Adult / 3.50 (2 ratings) (2)
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YazZMaN
YazZMaN		 Mar 24, 2009
After reading the first room, I was actually expecting something that I could rate a 7. Unfortunately, all the following rooms were way too short, and the story lacked any real effort (although the grammar was much better than what I'm used to).

You seem like the type of person who has the ability to write good stuff, so if you put more time into what you're doing, your ratings will increase.
by YazZMaN on Mar 24, 2009
hakinaro
hakinaro		 Mar 12, 2009
by hakinaro on Mar 12, 2009

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