*****The little lonely girl******

Written by dami5864697 / R: Restricted - Adult / 4.00 (3 ratings) (3)
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NoProblemsHere
NoProblemsHere		 Aug 17, 2018
"Guarantee you'll like the story"

It was okay, I guess, but the grammatical errors in this story makes people in ROBLOX look like grammar gods.


lol

It was pretty much the same as "*Your Crush*," so it didn't really surprise me, I was just hoping for a good read.
-NPH
by NoProblemsHere on Aug 17, 2018
ForBeautylieswithin1
ForBeautylieswithin1		 Dec 20, 2014
I like the story HATE the punctuation. I'm 11. You are? Well, you must be old enough to at LEAST TRY to spell okay. Even I Mi spell words, so why don't you redo the story, edit it, and then show it off to the world? This story has a chance, so I'll give you a 6!
by ForBeautylieswithin1 on Dec 20, 2014
TheCandyMan
TheCandyMan		 Jun 3, 2011
That. Was. Bad. But hey, you managed to spell OK throughout the story. Kind of..'U' is truly not acceptable in a story, you need some puntuation classes, or just ask your school teacher to help you with your writing. I'll cut you some slack since you're only a child and offer you a 4. Even I question my actions, but...who cares?
by TheCandyMan on Jun 3, 2011

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