*The little lonely girl**

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
NoProblemsHere	Aug 17, 2018	"Guarantee you'll like the story" It was okay, I guess, but the grammatical errors in this story makes people in ROBLOX look like grammar gods. lol It was pretty much the same as "Your Crush," so it didn't really surprise me, I was just hoping for a good read. -NPH by NoProblemsHere on Aug 17, 2018
ForBeautylieswithin1	Dec 20, 2014	I like the story HATE the punctuation. I'm 11. You are? Well, you must be old enough to at LEAST TRY to spell okay. Even I Mi spell words, so why don't you redo the story, edit it, and then show it off to the world? This story has a chance, so I'll give you a 6! by ForBeautylieswithin1 on Dec 20, 2014
TheCandyMan	Jun 3, 2011	That. Was. Bad. But hey, you managed to spell OK throughout the story. Kind of..'U' is truly not acceptable in a story, you need some puntuation classes, or just ask your school teacher to help you with your writing. I'll cut you some slack since you're only a child and offer you a 4. Even I question my actions, but...who cares? by TheCandyMan on Jun 3, 2011