Comments & Ratings
|This isn't a story. No plot, no story, no nothing. You just slapped on a couple of stupid options and called it a story. Boring, incomplete, and downright bad. Stories should have proper grammar.|
|None of the options seem to go anywhere. It's boring.|
Grammar was terrible. Spelling was terrible. Overall plot was terrible. The storyline was terrible. The dialogue is terrible. I would've given it a two if it had at least mentioned my name. |
Well, simple. This story was trash. Actually, it wasn't even a story. It was some sentences that had pathetic grammer. How old are you, three? Wants some tips for a good story?|
1. Go to school and learn proper grammer
2.Actually think of a good plot.
3.Make the pages longer.
4.Don't end the story every time someone picks something.
Overall: It was crap.
|Grammar and spelling was bad. It probably would've been better if you made it so you can choose if you are a guy or a girl. I was trying the story and when I figured out my crush was a guy, I was like, "Crap..."|
|The fact that you cannot spell you're correctly warrants this rating.|
|The fact that you repeatedly use "u" because you are so fucking lazy you can't type out the letters Y-O-U warrants a 1 rating.|
|You forgot to add a story!|