Comments & Ratings
|I like the different storylines, but add more of a plot.|
To say this is bad is like saying it would be somewhat annoying if the world exploded. This story is a disaster. It's over way too quickly, the grammar is terrible, there's no effort, I don't even know who anyone in the story is, and the endings make no sense what so ever.|
If you put in a tiny amount of effort, this would be a lot better. One thing you actually did right is not have a bunch of loose ends, but that's not a surprise seeing how small the story is and how low effort the story is.
|...Sorry, I can't say this was the best story I've seen around. You might need to fix the grammar, and give it an actual story. I chose 2 things, and it was already over.|
|GRAMMAR! Your grammar really need some work. Also your first part made no sense! It was just saying you are you but if you want to change that pick an option. You didn't even create characters. The reader doesn't know who they are dating!|
I've made a pact with myself to explain my reasoning for giving ratings, and I intend to keep that pact no matter how bad the story is (this story was absolute crap)|
The grammar in this story radiates laziness, alongside the lazy storyline and the damn lazy author. I'll admit, I killed my lungs laughing at the poor quality of this story, so I can't help but think this story was just one big joke, because, that's what it is, a sorry excuse for a "story."
If you had tried a little harder, just a little, it may have turned out MUCH better.
All in all, it was worse than Applebees soup
|What is this?|
|I can't stop laughing at how bad this is.|
It's YOU not u.
|Holy s***, this is terrible.|
|This isn't a story. No plot, no story, no nothing. You just slapped on a couple of stupid options and called it a story. Boring, incomplete, and downright bad. Stories should have proper grammar.|
|None of the options seem to go anywhere. It's boring.|
Grammar was terrible. Spelling was terrible. Overall plot was terrible. The storyline was terrible. The dialogue is terrible. I would've given it a two if it had at least mentioned my name. |
Well, simple. This story was trash. Actually, it wasn't even a story. It was some sentences that had pathetic grammer. How old are you, three? Wants some tips for a good story?|
1. Go to school and learn proper grammer
2.Actually think of a good plot.
3.Make the pages longer.
4.Don't end the story every time someone picks something.
Overall: It was crap.
|Grammar and spelling was bad. It probably would've been better if you made it so you can choose if you are a guy or a girl. I was trying the story and when I figured out my crush was a guy, I was like, "Crap..."|
|The fact that you cannot spell you're correctly warrants this rating.|
|The fact that you repeatedly use "u" because you are so fucking lazy you can't type out the letters Y-O-U warrants a 1 rating.|
|You forgot to add a story!|