Your Crush

Written by dami5864697 / G: General Audiences /

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Author	Date	Comment
coolcoolcool	Jun 4, 2020	this was so bad it was good by coolcoolcool on Jun 4, 2020
nylon	Dec 14, 2019	STORY: pick ur outfit look good now your crush likes u the end Yeah, don by nylon on Dec 14, 2019
Mudkipper6	Oct 12, 2019	You just pick your look and that's it by Mudkipper6 on Oct 12, 2019
noahnoah	Aug 26, 2019	Terrible. Not worth a read at all. There is no effort and little if any storyline. by noahnoah on Aug 26, 2019
Tesserae109	Jul 28, 2019	Ok. IT SUCKS. Wait I spelled that wrong. it sux jusst liek u. Um hello? SPELLING? And hello? STORY!!? by Tesserae109 on Jul 28, 2019
penguin	Jul 7, 2019	I like the different storylines, but add more of a plot. by penguin on Jul 7, 2019
AGuy27	Jun 14, 2019	To say this is bad is like saying it would be somewhat annoying if the world exploded. This story is a disaster. It's over way too quickly, the grammar is terrible, there's no effort, I don't even know who anyone in the story is, and the endings make no sense what so ever. If you put in a tiny amount of effort, this would be a lot better. One thing you actually did right is not have a bunch of loose ends, but that's not a surprise seeing how small the story is and how low effort the story is. by AGuy27 on Jun 14, 2019
CoriOleander	Jun 8, 2019	...Sorry, I can't say this was the best story I've seen around. You might need to fix the grammar, and give it an actual story. I chose 2 things, and it was already over. by CoriOleander on Jun 8, 2019
janemaddie	Mar 28, 2019	GRAMMAR! Your grammar really need some work. Also your first part made no sense! It was just saying you are you but if you want to change that pick an option. You didn't even create characters. The reader doesn't know who they are dating! by janemaddie on Mar 28, 2019
NoProblemsHere	Aug 17, 2018	I've made a pact with myself to explain my reasoning for giving ratings, and I intend to keep that pact no matter how bad the story is (this story was absolute crap) The grammar in this story radiates laziness, alongside the lazy storyline and the damn lazy author. I'll admit, I killed my lungs laughing at the poor quality of this story, so I can't help but think this story was just one big joke, because, that's what it is, a sorry excuse for a "story." If you had tried a little harder, just a little, it may have turned out MUCH better. All in all, it was worse than Applebees soup lol -NPH by NoProblemsHere on Aug 17, 2018
Spidersheep99	May 11, 2018	What is this? by Spidersheep99 on May 11, 2018
dungeondelver	Nov 18, 2017	I can't stop laughing at how bad this is. by dungeondelver on Nov 18, 2017
marnieink	Aug 20, 2017	Absolute sh!t. It's YOU not u. by marnieink on Aug 20, 2017
Creeper909	Jul 10, 2017	Holy s***, this is terrible. by Creeper909 on Jul 10, 2017
NeoNyte	Mar 30, 2017	by NeoNyte on Mar 30, 2017
NeoNyte	Mar 30, 2017	This isn't a story. No plot, no story, no nothing. You just slapped on a couple of stupid options and called it a story. Boring, incomplete, and downright bad. Stories should have proper grammar. by NeoNyte on Mar 30, 2017
Crimson0Rebirth	Oct 15, 2016	None of the options seem to go anywhere. It's boring. by Crimson0Rebirth on Oct 15, 2016
TheCandyMan	May 30, 2011	Grammar was terrible. Spelling was terrible. Overall plot was terrible. The storyline was terrible. The dialogue is terrible. I would've given it a two if it had at least mentioned my name. Terrible. by TheCandyMan on May 30, 2011
Leah1597	Apr 17, 2009	Well, simple. This story was trash. Actually, it wasn't even a story. It was some sentences that had pathetic grammer. How old are you, three? Wants some tips for a good story? 1. Go to school and learn proper grammer 2.Actually think of a good plot. 3.Make the pages longer. 4.Don't end the story every time someone picks something. Overall: It was crap. by Leah1597 on Apr 17, 2009
Cheatgnome	Mar 25, 2009	Grammar and spelling was bad. It probably would've been better if you made it so you can choose if you are a guy or a girl. I was trying the story and when I figured out my crush was a guy, I was like, "Crap..." by Cheatgnome on Mar 25, 2009
vancelandow	Mar 12, 2009	by vancelandow on Mar 12, 2009
Calen	Mar 11, 2009	The fact that you cannot spell you're correctly warrants this rating. by Calen on Mar 11, 2009
apotheosis	Mar 9, 2009	The fact that you repeatedly use "u" because you are so fucking lazy you can't type out the letters Y-O-U warrants a 1 rating. by apotheosis on Mar 9, 2009
YazZMaN	Mar 8, 2009	You forgot to add a story! by YazZMaN on Mar 8, 2009

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