fight for the school 2

Written by adam1 / PG: Parental Guidance Suggested / 5.00 (5 ratings) (5)
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Lackofmop
Lackofmop		 Jul 5, 2013
Funny, but not that good.
by Lackofmop on Jul 5, 2013
Clark
Clark		 Apr 1, 2013
by Clark on Apr 1, 2013
Artazansss
Artazansss		 Sep 24, 2011
by Artazansss on Sep 24, 2011
asheel
asheel		 Jun 24, 2009
U could have had more action
by asheel on Jun 24, 2009
apotheosis
apotheosis		 Mar 9, 2009
"THEY PUT YOU IN A COFFIN AND YOU SUFFOCATE

u lose"

A couple of things. First off, you capitalize proper nouns and and the first word of each sentence. Secondly "u" is actually spelled Y-O-U
by apotheosis on Mar 9, 2009

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