fight for the school
Comments & Ratings
| Author | Rating | Date | Comment |
|---|---|---|---|
| Alluka |
Dec 15, 2017 | The plot, characters, punctuation, grammar, spelling etc.. needs to be worked on. | |
| Clark |
Apr 1, 2013 | ||
| Artazansss |
Sep 24, 2011 | ||
| TheCandyMan |
May 19, 2011 | I third what Calen said. :D | |
| KingMalice |
May 13, 2010 | I would have just nailed bully with a tire iorn. The End | |
| asheel |
Jun 24, 2009 | i like the bomb | |
| apotheosis |
Mar 9, 2009 | I second what Calen said. | |
| Calen |
Feb 9, 2009 | .__.; Grammar and plot. Kthxbye |
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| laco |
Feb 8, 2009 |