Pandemic

Written by zaxoman / R: Restricted - Adult /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
Thickskullman	May 25, 2013	Short, unfinished. Would have given a 3 if not for the unusual virus. by Thickskullman on May 25, 2013
TheCandyMan	Jul 31, 2011	Excellent. I enjoyed this, your writing style is to my satisfaction, but my problem was that you spelt a few words incorrectly, and you keep switching from past-tense to Present. Which is pretty distracting. I also prefer realism in stories. If HS travels through liquids,if you drove a car, wouldn't the gasses which contains the bacteria be released into the atmosphere, thus, practically infecting everything that inhales it? I'm giving this an eight because I enjoyed it, and your writing style is unique. It's not often that I enjoy reading something when pressing the 'random story' button. by TheCandyMan on Jul 31, 2011
Crimmy	Aug 10, 2009	by Crimmy on Aug 10, 2009
laco	Feb 5, 2009	This story isn't finished!!!!!!!! by laco on Feb 5, 2009
laco	Feb 5, 2009	Kuntucky Fricken chicken.... (I have always wanted to write that!!!!) P.S. it awsome!!! by laco on Feb 5, 2009
Calen	Nov 19, 2008	This story is brilliant, with a few flaws. First of all, it seems luck has a lot to do with winning. Stories like that are difficult to get through, and annoying. Secondly, some rooms are underdeveloped. Overall I like your writing style, keep on working and keep it up! I thoroughly enjoyed this. :) by Calen on Nov 19, 2008