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Viral Infection. The first hours.

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Author Rating Date Comment
Feb 18, 2015
Pretty bad. This should be rated R or MA. This is definitely not G. Bad words ARE included.
by Creeper909 on Feb 18, 2015
Oct 13, 2013
by Lackofmop on Oct 13, 2013
Feb 13, 2012
Whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa. Did all the reviews get moved on to another story or something? What the hell?
by TheCandyMan on Feb 13, 2012
Aug 4, 2011
I'm happy to note that there are people with great writing skills on this site. The story though, is unique, though unfinished. Which is why I'm giving it a seven. I know it's been three years..magic. But my opinion on here will never change: You're a little brat with terrible tastes, who can niether sing, write or rate, and your humor is just stupidity and moronic. I don't care if I sound harsh, you're completely trolling this site with your bullshit, no matter if magic's ever going to read this.

I'm going to give this a nine. Not because of the story, just to level things out a little. Personally as I said above, this deserves a seven/eight, if finished.


...Yeah. That is all.
by TheCandyMan on Aug 4, 2011
Apr 21, 2009
This wasn't all that great, but the first few rooms were enough to prove to me that you know how to write. The rooms got way to short and crazy-choppy after the initial choices, and I think you probably know it.

More effort, dude.

More effort.

By the way, I'm sorry to see that magic gave you an abusive rating. We have a lot of retards who roam the site and partake in such activities, so don't take it too hard.
by YazZMaN on Apr 21, 2009
Nov 11, 2008
You're story is horrible and suckish, you better watch your language and dirty mouth by saying the "f.u" word Cal1174. If you send me a vulgar and hateful message, I'll tell my mom. By the way, I hope jeffisthebest and apotheosis hate your story too.
by magic on Nov 11, 2008

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