Viral Infection. The first hours.
Comments & Ratings
Author | Rating | Date | Comment |
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Creeper909 |
Feb 18, 2015 | Pretty bad. This should be rated R or MA. This is definitely not G. Bad words ARE included. | |
Lackofmop |
Oct 13, 2013 | Decent. | |
TheCandyMan |
Feb 13, 2012 | Whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa. Did all the reviews get moved on to another story or something? What the hell? | |
TheCandyMan |
Aug 4, 2011 | I'm happy to note that there are people with great writing skills on this site. The story though, is unique, though unfinished. Which is why I'm giving it a seven. I know it's been three years..magic. But my opinion on here will never change: You're a little brat with terrible tastes, who can niether sing, write or rate, and your humor is just stupidity and moronic. I don't care if I sound harsh, you're completely trolling this site with your bullshit, no matter if magic's ever going to read this. I'm going to give this a nine. Not because of the story, just to level things out a little. Personally as I said above, this deserves a seven/eight, if finished. So.... ...Yeah. That is all. |
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YazZMaN |
Apr 21, 2009 | This wasn't all that great, but the first few rooms were enough to prove to me that you know how to write. The rooms got way to short and crazy-choppy after the initial choices, and I think you probably know it. More effort, dude. More effort. By the way, I'm sorry to see that magic gave you an abusive rating. We have a lot of retards who roam the site and partake in such activities, so don't take it too hard. |
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magic |
Nov 11, 2008 | You're story is horrible and suckish, you better watch your language and dirty mouth by saying the "f.u" word Cal1174. If you send me a vulgar and hateful message, I'll tell my mom. By the way, I hope jeffisthebest and apotheosis hate your story too. |