Find the Criminal

Written by magic / G: General Audiences /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
Clark	Mar 7, 2013	by Clark on Mar 7, 2013
Artazansss	Sep 24, 2011	by Artazansss on Sep 24, 2011
KingMalice	May 28, 2010	by KingMalice on May 28, 2010
tinahuynhaz	Jan 14, 2009	add more!!! i didn't want the story to end like that!!! by tinahuynhaz on Jan 14, 2009
Calen	Nov 5, 2008	You have potential. You need to stop doing those automatic kill rooms, as they're not that funny. They can be in some situations, but so far I don't see any. Try making a serious story. Your grammar is okay, so just try going from there :) by Calen on Nov 5, 2008