Find the Criminal

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by Clark on Mar 7, 2013
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by KingMalice on May 28, 2010
add more!!! i didn't want the story to end like that!!!
by tinahuynhaz on Jan 14, 2009
You have potential. You need to stop doing those automatic kill rooms, as they're not that funny. They can be in some situations, but so far I don't see any.
Try making a serious story. Your grammar is okay, so just try going from there :)
by Calen on Nov 5, 2008

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