The Jock

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EndMaster
EndMaster
Jan 3, 2011
See, if some more effort had been put into this story, it could've been a lot better. There certainly are some humourous bits here (well to me anyway) but the lack of description for most of the pages subtract a few points.

Anyway, it still exceeded my expectations.
by EndMaster on Jan 3, 2011
builderman
builderman
Aug 8, 2010
by builderman on Aug 8, 2010

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