The Jock

Written by bigdj / MA: Mature Audiences / 8.00 (2 ratings) (2)
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EndMaster
EndMaster		 Jan 3, 2011
See, if some more effort had been put into this story, it could've been a lot better. There certainly are some humourous bits here (well to me anyway) but the lack of description for most of the pages subtract a few points.

Anyway, it still exceeded my expectations.
by EndMaster on Jan 3, 2011
builderman
builderman		 Aug 8, 2010
by builderman on Aug 8, 2010

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