Escape From Hell Asylum

Written by NCPolice55571 / NR: Not Rated /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
SteveFreeling	Feb 24, 2014	It's great, but it's very hard to survive it. But, if you don't give up on it too fast, you'll be able to win. by SteveFreeling on Feb 24, 2014
Clark	Mar 6, 2013	by Clark on Mar 6, 2013
TheCandyMan	Apr 27, 2011	That was..weirdly satisfying! :D by TheCandyMan on Apr 27, 2011
squishydemon	Apr 12, 2011	(After hearing a noise on my way into the building) "You run back to your car. This entire asylum idea was a bad decision. You wait by your overheated car until a passing motorist finally notices you. The End." I didn't even get into the asylum and I won... Hmm... Yeah, I would edit this, a lot of (what seem to be) logical choices result in immediate death. by squishydemon on Apr 12, 2011
ArkeNamrov	Apr 21, 2010	Made Little To No Sense, And Too Many Plot Holes And Loops. by ArkeNamrov on Apr 21, 2010
builderman	Jun 9, 2009	it gave me nightmaresin a good way epic story! by builderman on Jun 9, 2009
venezia	May 31, 2009	Regarding the well written threads of this story, I find that they are enticing and leave the reader wanting more. Though I'm unaware of which ending is the real ending, I don't really care since I like having a new adventure every time I play. The random segments are also very funny. They made me laugh out loud. by venezia on May 31, 2009
AssassinByBlood	Oct 19, 2008	Wow I wanted to stop but couldnt and everytime something went wrong I had to find an answer to get out of it I feel like I am that patient now and I feel lightheaded . . . Oh well by AssassinByBlood on Oct 19, 2008
Ghizzard	May 28, 2008	by Ghizzard on May 28, 2008
EndMaster	Mar 7, 2007	I always wished this one had been a lot more structured, since there's a lot of potential, but of course the writing's going to vary when public access is allowed. Still this one of the better public collaboration stories and I liked most of it. by EndMaster on Mar 7, 2007
TyCamden	Mar 7, 2007	by TyCamden on Mar 7, 2007
erispie	Jun 5, 2006	by erispie on Jun 5, 2006
ChubbyTeletubby	Jan 17, 2006	Much better than that 'Behind the Shield' crap, NCPolice. You did a very good job here. The story flowed pretty good and kept me interested throughout. I still have to dock you points for basic spelling and grammatical errors, though. by ChubbyTeletubby on Jan 17, 2006
shuga313	Jan 7, 2006	by shuga313 on Jan 7, 2006
messa	Oct 17, 2005	Good story, but some of the spelling and grammer is off. by messa on Oct 17, 2005
vampire	Oct 1, 2005	It was good but it needs to be finished. by vampire on Oct 1, 2005
wickedwonka	Jun 27, 2005	by wickedwonka on Jun 27, 2005
donteatpoop	Jun 13, 2005	Good stuff, very enjoyable read. Kind of freaky finding out who you are. The musical diddy was a nice touch too. by donteatpoop on Jun 13, 2005
gpshaw	Apr 22, 2005	Cool music but too many dead ends. by gpshaw on Apr 22, 2005
gpshaw	Apr 22, 2005	Not bad but you need to add to it I ran into some dead ends and I think you'd be better at making it than I, oh and where did you get that Halloween music , it's cool. PS Did you ever play The Suffering by gpshaw on Apr 22, 2005
SonicKal	Mar 15, 2005	Amazing. Truly amazing. by SonicKal on Mar 15, 2005
Storm	Feb 7, 2005	That was great and scary it was cool how you got that tune in the first page and was it from the film called HALLOWEN cause i really like tha song so i give it ten! by Storm on Feb 7, 2005
RiotGrrrl	Jan 17, 2005	Disconcerting subject matter and virtually endless in-story options makes this a very fun read. Good job. by RiotGrrrl on Jan 17, 2005
langoki	Jan 10, 2005	by langoki on Jan 10, 2005
DavidSky	Jan 3, 2005	This story has some big problems. Choices are random and it's filled with spelling errors. The basic idea is good and some storylines are OK, but overall it's kind of an inconsistent mess. by DavidSky on Jan 3, 2005
Yuki	Nov 23, 2004	Pretty good! I liked the music and the voice at the end was pretty funny. LOL! Anyways it was good. by Yuki on Nov 23, 2004
fritz	Nov 14, 2004	by fritz on Nov 14, 2004
Cat2000	Nov 10, 2004	Very good. I especially like the music right at the beginning. The use of pictures is great by Cat2000 on Nov 10, 2004
Karold	Oct 26, 2004	I thought that that writing from one of the authors was extreemly good and the pictures were very scary. I would have given it a ten but I couldn't because the only pathway that really leads anywhere I enjoyed was when you go around the back of the asylum. (Sorry if I have offended any of the people that contributed to the story. Honest opinion here...) by Karold on Oct 26, 2004
BlackBathory	Sep 6, 2004	very very good! i will have to add some pages when i think of something! by BlackBathory on Sep 6, 2004
Speck	Jun 25, 2004	Not too shabby, could use a little work though... by Speck on Jun 25, 2004
Lucid	May 19, 2004	Great start! Love the graphics! by Lucid on May 19, 2004
CelticFrostQueen	Feb 7, 2004	WOW! Great graphics, enthralling story line and enjoyable writing style. I am impressed, NC! by CelticFrostQueen on Feb 7, 2004
CJW	Jan 22, 2004	by CJW on Jan 22, 2004

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