Comments & Ratings
||Feb 24, 2014||It's great, but it's very hard to survive it. But, if you don't give up on it too fast, you'll be able to win.|
||Mar 6, 2013|
||Apr 27, 2011||That was..weirdly satisfying! :D|
||Apr 12, 2011||
(After hearing a noise on my way into the building)|
"You run back to your car. This entire asylum idea was a bad decision.
You wait by your overheated car until a passing motorist finally notices you.
I didn't even get into the asylum and I won... Hmm...
Yeah, I would edit this, a lot of (what seem to be) logical choices result in immediate death.
||Apr 21, 2010||Made Little To No Sense, And Too Many Plot Holes And Loops.|
||Jun 9, 2009||it gave me nightmares*in a good way* epic story!|
||May 31, 2009||
Regarding the well written threads of this story, I find that they are enticing and leave the reader wanting more. Though I'm unaware of which ending is the real ending, I don't really care since I like having a new adventure every time I play.|
The random segments are also very funny. They made me laugh out loud.
||Oct 19, 2008||
I wanted to stop but couldnt
and everytime something went wrong I had to find an answer to get out of it
I feel like I am that patient now and I feel lightheaded . . . Oh well
||May 28, 2008|
||Mar 7, 2007||
I always wished this one had been a lot more structured, since there's a lot of potential, but of course the writing's going to vary when public access is allowed.|
Still this one of the better public collaboration stories and I liked most of it.
||Mar 7, 2007|
||Jun 5, 2006|
||Jan 17, 2006||
Much better than that 'Behind the Shield' crap, NCPolice. You did a very good job here. The story flowed pretty good and kept me interested throughout. |
I still have to dock you points for basic spelling and grammatical errors, though.
||Jan 7, 2006|
||Oct 17, 2005||Good story, but some of the spelling and grammer is off.|
||Oct 1, 2005||It was good but it needs to be finished.|
||Jun 27, 2005|
||Jun 13, 2005||Good stuff, very enjoyable read. Kind of freaky finding out who you are. The musical diddy was a nice touch too.|
||Apr 22, 2005||Cool music but too many dead ends.|
||Apr 22, 2005||
Not bad but you need to add to it I ran into some dead ends and I think you'd be better at making it than I, oh and where did you get that Halloween music , it's cool.|
PS Did you ever play The Suffering
||Mar 15, 2005||Amazing. Truly amazing.|
||Feb 7, 2005||That was great and scary it was cool how you got that tune in the first page and was it from the film called HALLOWEN cause i really like tha song so i give it ten!|
||Jan 17, 2005||Disconcerting subject matter and virtually endless in-story options makes this a very fun read. Good job.|
||Jan 10, 2005|
||Jan 3, 2005||This story has some big problems. Choices are random and it's filled with spelling errors. The basic idea is good and some storylines are OK, but overall it's kind of an inconsistent mess.|
||Nov 23, 2004||Pretty good! I liked the music and the voice at the end was pretty funny. LOL! Anyways it was good.|
||Nov 14, 2004|
||Nov 10, 2004||Very good. I especially like the music right at the beginning. The use of pictures is great|
||Oct 26, 2004||I thought that that writing from one of the authors was extreemly good and the pictures were very scary. I would have given it a ten but I couldn't because the only pathway that really leads anywhere I enjoyed was when you go around the back of the asylum. (Sorry if I have offended any of the people that contributed to the story. Honest opinion here...)|
||Sep 6, 2004||very very good! i will have to add some pages when i think of something!|
||Jun 25, 2004||Not too shabby, could use a little work though...|
||May 19, 2004||Great start! Love the graphics!|
||Feb 7, 2004||WOW! Great graphics, enthralling story line and enjoyable writing style. I am impressed, NC!|
||Jan 22, 2004|