Blood Lust

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Not bad...A simple read, though lacking in description this could become something satisfying. I don't see how this could be in the Romance section, but then, nobody does, it's unfinished, undernourished, growth is a necessity.

I can't really say much because..Even after all this time, I haven't written anything. I'm nothing but a lost, bitter critic, striving to find something to contribute to, that or find someway to write my own little CYOA, countless (or not) times have I taken the time and effort to write my own, but they turn out completely useless. I have nothing to add to it and it turns out like the scum seen all over this site. Anyway, continue your little Vampire story!
by TheCandyMan on Sep 24, 2011
Bit linear in places, but a worthy addition to the romance selection.
by EndMaster on Jan 12, 2011
Not all that bad, actually. I think you are lacking a lot with discription and it seems like you rushed yourself a lot in a few places. One of the more difficult things about writing (at least for me) is skipping details in order to further the plot. Coming back to it doesn't always work.
by donteatpoop on Jan 6, 2011
by candydog121 on Oct 24, 2010
It's awesome! Just keep writing!!!!
by LittleRobinForever on Jun 1, 2010
by Skullz123 on Feb 28, 2010
by dfalan on Nov 11, 2008
Good writing so far but not finished. I don't think there's any way to reach any kind of end yet. But so far it looks promising.
by Zarok on Aug 19, 2008
by jp33 on Aug 16, 2008

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