The Ultimate Pokemon

Written by badbadboy47 / R: Restricted - Adult / 5.50 (2 ratings) (2)
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DSNYDER
DSNYDER		 Jan 12, 2019
Chuck Norris was my first battle after leaving the missingno realm. But it can’t continue..
by DSNYDER on Jan 12, 2019
DSNYDER
DSNYDER		 Jan 12, 2019
I tried to run to the ten mile Pokémon center. I went to hell and my brain is in a Charmander’s stomach. How am I typing this?
by DSNYDER on Jan 12, 2019
Adamented
Adamented		 Jun 22, 2008
Ok badbadboy47.
Normally I would rate this a 1 2 or 3.
But, it was your first story and you are my friend.

Things that made me rate this story a 4 was because some words were wrong and the grammar was bad. You also must have had the caps lock on for most of the parts. Also there was not many rooms. And if the idea was to fight the elite four, then how come you only fought the champion hugh hefner?

Still it was funny so a 4.
by Adamented on Jun 22, 2008

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