Comments & Ratings
||Dec 30, 2009|
||Feb 28, 2009|
||Jun 2, 2008||dude, THIS SUCKS!|
||Jun 1, 2008||
There's only one way the story could go, considering there IS a part 2, but I would have liked to see more choices. Some bad grammar, but it was a good read so you earn a 6. Next time: Longer descriptions, more choices, don't do a room with choices just for the hell of it where only one leads to the next room (hella annoying) and Pokemon stories are VERY hard to accomplish given the gameplay. The only way I could ever rate a Pokemon game theme story higher than a 6 is if the person put hours of work into it and made it like the game. Then again, the game will always have more choices, so not much need. |
If you're focusing more on plot, elaborate the characters and story- battles just waste time, so cut down on those, otherwise you'll be left with a million loose ends if you want the story to be halfway decent.
Still, a good effort for a Pokemon story, one of the best I've seen so far.
Lots of room for improvement, but I think you can do it.