Destiny

Written by dogz911 / G: General Audiences / 8.67 (6 ratings) (6)
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Author Rating Date Comment
Yaya1314
Yaya1314		 Mar 6, 2011
by Yaya1314 on Mar 6, 2011
Ramidel
Ramidel		 Dec 28, 2008
Keep working on this.

Also, why the hell is the story rated G? ^_^
by Ramidel on Dec 28, 2008
dfalan
dfalan		 Nov 11, 2008
by dfalan on Nov 11, 2008
Leblanc4prez
Leblanc4prez		 Sep 22, 2008
I likes it already. Good work Destiny.
by Leblanc4prez on Sep 22, 2008
Vesnicie
Vesnicie		 Jul 3, 2008
It's ok.

Somewhat blah character development.
Somewhat blargh grammar
Sommewhat bleck plot.

But a lot of rooms and, at least, coherent, which around here is saying quite a bit.
by Vesnicie on Jul 3, 2008
Calen
Calen		 Jun 10, 2008
Keep working on it. Your grammar, punctuation, spelling and plot seems to be enough to handle a huge story like this, so I'm going to be nice and rate this high in the hopes that you will keep working on it. :)
by Calen on Jun 10, 2008

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