Comments & Ratings
||Mar 6, 2011|
||Dec 28, 2008||
Keep working on this.|
Also, why the hell is the story rated G? ^_^
||Nov 11, 2008|
||Sep 22, 2008||I likes it already. Good work Destiny.|
||Jul 3, 2008||
Somewhat blah character development.
Somewhat blargh grammar
Sommewhat bleck plot.
But a lot of rooms and, at least, coherent, which around here is saying quite a bit.
||Jun 10, 2008||Keep working on it. Your grammar, punctuation, spelling and plot seems to be enough to handle a huge story like this, so I'm going to be nice and rate this high in the hopes that you will keep working on it. :)|