the story that makes no seance

Written by DSDude999 / R: Restricted - Adult /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
Artazansss	Oct 31, 2011	You probably 6 years old and have a lot of free time i would call this story shit,but then that word would be meaningless. by Artazansss on Oct 31, 2011
TheCandyMan	Jul 23, 2011	For the first time ever..I completely agree with Magic, besides the first point she made. Usually I'd probably rip on her for her terrible immature rating, but she's correct. This is the definition of shit. The title DOES (Or almost..) say this story isn't supposed to make 'seance.' But the author could've at least applied a little grammar, or at least more than one sentence and spell this crap correctly. If you get my drift? I understand that this err...'Story' was created by a small child. But someone perhaps half his age, (argueably) could write to a better standard. This doesn't even deserve a one.. by TheCandyMan on Jul 23, 2011
magic	May 15, 2010	There are about four reasons why I gave you a 1. 1. It makes no sense. 2. You spelled "sense" wrong. 3. Calling people "niggers" is not cool. 4. Your grammar sucks. Have fun making other sucky stories for all eternity. by magic on May 15, 2010
Adamented	Jun 3, 2008	I only made it to the 2nd room so wtf was the point of this? I mean I know that the story is not supposed to make sense and you spelled it wrong and what you just thought putting these up would make you famous?! I'm ratting this a 1. You must have one boring life. by Adamented on Jun 3, 2008