Ice Wolves

Written by zaxoman / R: Restricted - Adult /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Rating	Date	Comment
Vesnicie		Apr 18, 2008	Same score as your last one, because this is pretty much on a par. Your stories sort of remind me of the old Goosebumps CYOA's, especially the bit about strip clubs and such. Calen is too idealistic. Fatalism FTW! by Vesnicie on Apr 18, 2008
Calen		Apr 17, 2008	A good start- everything seemed to be going wonderfully before I realized the lack of options and sudden deaths (not to mention the death of one of my friends with no way to stop it, aka no way to stop her from going and dying) made me realize it wasn't going to be as great as I thought. I'd recommend you delete the rooms before Amanda leaves and create an option where she survives. It seems that the story is very straight forward. There should be different paths for different people dying or one where all your friends survive. Just my opinion. Welcome to the site! by Calen on Apr 17, 2008