Pokemon Jouney 2

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
Infinate	Apr 20, 2010	by Infinate on Apr 20, 2010
Adamented	Jun 6, 2008	Ok, this story was not at all great but, I'll give you a 2 because it was a pokemon story. The reason I thought it wasnt great was because the plot was not at all good. Everything in the story wanted to kill you. And I dont even think the title is spelled right. Pokemon Jouney 2? by Adamented on Jun 6, 2008
Ghizzard	May 5, 2008	It started OK but then you just got lazy and ended it quickly. Wrong choice, you ruined it. by Ghizzard on May 5, 2008
Ghizzard	May 5, 2008	by Ghizzard on May 5, 2008
Leblanc4prez	Apr 6, 2008	Another one? Bro... this is getting sad... by Leblanc4prez on Apr 6, 2008
apotheosis	Mar 19, 2008	Where to begin... Spelling: Atrocious Plot: Ever heard of those great classics with rich plots? This isn't one of them. Character Development: None Logical Progression Evident In Choices: No Enjoyable: No Repetitive: Yes Just Like Other Stories Already Posted On This Site: Yes I suggest you look at the highly rated stories for inspiration and to learn how to put together a good story. by apotheosis on Mar 19, 2008
Vesnicie	Mar 5, 2008	Maybe you're just a kid and I'm a meanie head. But... You know, maybe the Barney Fanclub has a fanfic section. by Vesnicie on Mar 5, 2008
Calen	Mar 4, 2008	Any story with an option killyourself on the first page is going to suck. First law of nature. by Calen on Mar 4, 2008