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Eternal Sphere
Written by
Leblanc4prez
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R: Restricted - Adult
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KaticaLocke
Feb 27, 2008
This gets a 6 for effort and wit. It's a little bare in places, and confusing when the dialogue runs together in one paragraph, but I'd love to read more of it.
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