Criminal

Written by hep0005 / MA: Mature Audiences - Adult / 3.00 (2 ratings) (2)
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imphic
imphic		 Jan 2, 2012
Very lukewarm story. I recommend developing an antagonist or clarify a goal or goals to aim for.
by imphic on Jan 2, 2012
Artazansss
Artazansss		 Sep 23, 2011
by Artazansss on Sep 23, 2011

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