The Wounded Falcon

Written by dominicgaj / PG: Parental Guidance Suggested / 8.00 (2 ratings) (2)
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Calen
Calen		 Jan 14, 2008
Damn it, I always knew shiny objects were trouble.

Good job, man.
by Calen on Jan 14, 2008
Vesnicie
Vesnicie		 Jan 14, 2008
This story was very well written and the plot was tight as could be. You also successfully worked in a few objects and conditions in a way that wasn't overbearing to the reader. It could have used more development as a story, with better description of your mountainous surroundings. However, for what I think were your purposes in writing this short game, you did a commendable job.
by Vesnicie on Jan 14, 2008

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